Melodee Stoneberger
Monday, July 18, 2011
Should we punish the rich with higher taxes so the lazy and incompetent wont feel so bad about themselves?
Isnt it sad how some people spend their whole lives being jealous and resentful of the rich and call it "socialism"?
Can you rid the corruption in a country?
Unfortunately, leadership is often just a reflection of its people. A corrupt population gets corrupt leadership.
What should I do playing about playing goalkeeper?
My friend insist that I am a good goalkeeper, but when I tried out for my school team I didn't make it over two guys that are way worse than me, pretty much everyone I know on the team said that, and I heard next year the coach might pick me which is a good thing. But I wanna play for my club team and recently I could've had and opportunity but when my dad e-mailed my coach he said he was going to play his son[who is really go on the field] in full time goalie. So now im stuck playing field, and I am frustrated because our goalie last season left and I know I could play goalie. My best friend seems confident that I could play in a lower level pro team when I am older and maybe MLS, and if I get lucky EPL. I am good at diving and I am pretty aggressive when it comes to one-on-ones, I also probably was the best at my tryouts, but im confused because I know im good but I just don't get to play in goal any, which makes me mad because I want to play in it and im not terrible.
Is my punctuation and my grammar correct?
Every family needs a father figure. Tobias Wolff’s memoir This Boy’s Life illustrates a boy’s (Jack) struggle to find himself and a mother in search of financial stability and a complete family. As a child, Toby’s family was divided, leaving his father and elder brother on the East Coast and, for the most part, detached from his life. Toby is resentful toward his mother for abandoning his father and moving them around, fleeing from her abusive boyfriend. The conflict mainly begins when she marries his stepfather with whom he doesn't get along with. At the same time-- he also has a close bond with her and is afraid of losing her love.
How do i get over this fear?
At tryouts my coach decided to make me a flyer. I am very small and light so she said i was perfect. I am okay at doing sponges i just need some more upper body strength, but when we started to do first floor i FREAKED out! I really want to be a flyer but for now i am terrified. Anybody ever have this problem? By the way i am going into 10th grade, and have never done cheer before, i did gymnastics for 3 years though. PLEASE HELP ME! HOW DO I GET OVER THE FEAR?
Arena Football League Open Tryouts?
you don't have to be the biggest of strongest guy out there. Arena is all about speed. the game is played at a much faster pace. if u wanna join them, alot of time on the teams home page during the off season they will have a tryout section.
Could you critique my essay? PLEASE?
Your sentence structure, tenses, and wording are a bit choppy. Take for example your sentence, "Through Jack's transformation from being a teenage scoundrel to a well-disciplined, he strives for a better life and yearns for higher education so he could get out of the hell hole he is in." The sentence is a bit long, and your grammar is slightly off. It would flow more smoothly if instead it read, "During the book, Jack transitions from being a teenage scoundrel to a well-disciplined young man. However, he is constantly striving for a better life and yearning for higher education so he can escape his unpleasant life." The use of 'hell-hole' brings down the novel and makes it less formal. The essay is too long to go through everything here, but I would work on coherency and sentence structure primarily. Perhaps get a friend to look at it and mark it, and then make sure to implement the changes they suggest. Good luck
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